Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Open Prompt Revisions

Dec.3rd

2008. In a literary work, a minor character, often known as a foil, possesses traits that emphasize, by contrast or comparison, the distinctive characteristics and qualities of the main character. For example, the ideas or behavior of a minor character might be used to highlight the weaknesses or strengths of the main character. Choose a novel or play in which a minor character serves as a foil for the main character. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the relation between the minor character and the major character illuminates the meaning of the work.

In The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain the character Buck is used as a foil to the main character Huck. The two boys are almost the same age, have very similar names, and become very good friends. The author puts this character foil in the book in order to show the reader that upbringing and social status aren't everything.
The character Buck comes from an aristocratic family, one of high social class and incredible wealth. However, Bucks family acts very uncivilized and uneducated towards another family (who are their neighbors), the Shepherdsons, whom they are having a feud with. Buck is also not against slavery or think its wrong in any way, whereas Huck continually questions the ethics of owning another human. You would not generally think high social class and brutish characteristics go together, but you also wouldn't think a poor upbringing by an awful role model of a father would create a child like Huck; someone very clever, witty, and ethical.
Buck being well off and still being ignorant contrasts greatly to Huck coming from a lower social class and having sensible morals. This shows the reader that Mark Twain wanted them to realize that a person can never chose where they come from, but they can always chose where they go and who they become from there.
Due to the character Buck being Huck's foil, you can more clearly see what differentiates Huck as an individual. The reader finds out he has a good sense of whats right and whats wrong, especially when compared to someone like Buck, even though Huck came from a very unfortunate atmosphere as a child.

Nov. 13th

1990. Choose a novel or play that depicts a conflict between a parent (or a parental figure) and a son or daughter. Write an essay in which you analyze the sources of the conflict and explain how the conflict contributes to the meaning of the work. Avoid plot summary.

In the play Death of a Salesman by Arthur Miller, there is a deep conflict between the main character Willy, and his son Biff. The biggest reason for the conflict between them is Willy's inability to accept Biff as his own being, and instead views him much like he views Uncle Ben; as a sort of idol. Arthur Miller created Willy's idolization of Biff in order to show how parents dreams for their children can shape a child's being.
Throughout the entire play Biff speaks of wanting to move out West again to do farm work. This dream of his is a rough contrast to his fathers dreams for Biff of being "successful". To Willy, Biff won't be great unless he's bringing in a handsome sum of money. This is something Willy thinks Biff can do because of his similarities to Uncle Ben, who was successful in Willy's eyes.
The similarities Uncle Ben and Biff share are that they are both not only liked, but well liked, a phrase they said often in the play that was extremely important to Willy. Willy also doesn't see himself in Biff, just like he doesn't see himself as a success like Uncle Ben. However, Willy takes comfort in not seeing his own personality in Biff because he knows he hasn't been successful in the business world, and the thought of Biff being unlike him gives Willy hope.
If Willy had accepted Biff's dreams to farm instead of insisting Biff follow his own demands to enter in the business world, this parent-child conflict wouldn't occur. However, this conflict is put in by Miller in order to show how much parents dreams for their children influence the child's life. Biff would be happy if he didn't have his fathers opinions of what it is to really be successful and a great man riding on him all the time, and because of his father's opinions his pursuit of happiness is faltered.
Arthur Miller creates many different character conflicts in Death of a Salesman in order to show different meanings. The conflict between Willy and Biff makes the audience think about how parents influence their children, and adds so much to the development of the characters in his play.


Oct. 28th

1987. Some novels and plays seem to advocate changes in social or political attitudes or in traditions. Choose such a novel or play and note briefly the particular attitudes or traditions that the author apparently wishes to modify. Then analyze the techniques the author uses to influence the reader's or audience's views. Avoid plot summary.

Many people in this day and age have read the book The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain. It's just one of those books; not only a classic, but a book that changed the world. People often wonder, what makes one of those books? In the case of Huckleberry Finn, it was Twain advocating social change and tradition. He took a very untouchable subject in that time period; the wrongs of slavery, and made it touchable, so to speak. He made this happen by using such techniques as language, imagery, and most famously, satire.
Language in Huckleberry Finn accentuates the need for social change through the character Jim. Jim speaks in a rough, southern dialect, unlike all the other characters. This signifies the difference between education of white Americas during this time period opposed to African American slaves. Though this language can often slows down the reader, it is also a important and sends the reader a red flag as to the difference between main character Huckleberry and slave Jim. Twain was trying to tell the reader that this sort of indifference wasn't right through the use of written speech patterns.
One of the strongest uses of imagery in this book is when Jim is captured in the end and made to live in a tiny little shack full of snakes, insects, and other nasty creatures that frighten him. He is given almost no food by the people that capture him, and is treated very harshly. This makes the reader feel bad for Jim, and sympathizes with the fact that the people in the book treat him on a lower social status due to his race.
This book is most well known for one thing- satire. Mark Twain uses it constantly throughout this book in order to poke fun at certain issues of the time. One example of this is how the Widow Douglas is incredibly Christian and religious, yet she owns slaves and doesn't think there's anything wrong with it. This shows that even good, church going people in that time thought it was right for a person to be able to own another human being. Twain is clearly trying to make the reader think that way of thought is ridiculous, and by doing so saying that racial inequality isn't right.
Though the use of language, imagery, diction, and satire, Mark Twain puts a pretty good argument as to why slavery is not a good thing in the book The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Clearly Mark Twain wanted the reader to make a more ethical decision on the topic of slavery.

Sept. 16th

1984. Select a line or so of poetry, or a moment or scene in a novel, epic poem, or play that you find especially memorable. Write an essay in which you identify the line or the passage, explain its relationship to the work in which it is found, and analyze the reasons for its effectiveness.

In Robert Frost's poem "The Road Not Taken" the last three lines are "Two roads diverged in a wood, and I— I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." These lines create a very profound meaning to the poem by using strong diction as well as language.
Frost uses the word "I" repetitively in this poem. By saying things such as "I doubted if I should ever come back" along with "I could" "I stood" and many other "I" sentences, he's making it more announced to the reader that in the poem, the road he's taking is his own decision. This repetition becomes most pronounced to the reader when Frost repeats in the last three lines "I- I took the one less traveled by...".
This piece has the feeling of a writer trying to be abstract with his language. Frost doesn't want the reader knowing every single detail, he doesn't try to make the scene appeal to the senses. It's as if he wants the reader to make up their own visual of what a "wood" is, or what the "difference" is, so that each person can take away a little something different from this poem.
These lines of text also shows the reader a deeper interpretation of the poem. Upon reading and rereading this poem, you can see that Frost is trying to say that in life, there are going to be many different paths you can take. As an individual, you're free to chose whichever one you want; but keep in mind that whichever road you take will lead you to a different outcome. If you're just reading this poem as a surface read for the first time, you might not get those thoughts from reading the ending of his poem. You just might think "Alright, this guy chose a road! Good for him." when in fact, he's trying to say something much deeper.
All in all, the last three lines of Robert Frosts poem really do have a deep meaning that is seen throughout the entire poem. He uses great diction and abstract language to show the reader a deeper meaning of a person in the woods trying to chose between to roads.

Sunday, March 4, 2012

Synthesis of Course Material

#4 Blogger Papers
Going through all these topics from second hour in one night, I try to think about what we've spent the most time on for this class. I don't know how I didn't think of this one before, considering I've spent many miserable afternoons trying to spit out online papers I now regret "spitting out" because I have to edit my own "spit" by Tuesday.
But now I'm thinking gosh, I had to whip that stuff off quick, because I always gave myself a time limit. Something I'm very worried about with the AP exams; the time limit. And my paper being spit because I don't have enough time to form a seven paper.
But NOW I'm thinking gosh, even if I had hours to write a paper, could I even form a paper that got a seven? Those papers are a pretty big part of the AP exam I'd assume, and judging from the in class written papers I've gotten like... threes? on, at this point I guess I'm more worried about being able to write something the AP correctors say "oh yeah, this is at least a seven".
So what should I do when the AP exam rolls around? Probably not freak out; I'm going to get what I'm going to get. Think logically, write clearly.



#3 Vocabulary
Do you know how long I spent studying that stupid list? THAT stupid list. No, I bet you don't, because my final exam grade in no way reflects how much time I spent not only memorizing, but trying to give meaning to each and every one of those incredibly wordy definitions.
I chose this topic as a section mainly because even if my exam grade doesn't reflect it, I spent a whole lot of time on those words! And I plan to do the exact same thing before the AP exam, because I really don't think the AP test is going to be those vocab words as every answer, and we just have to show we can apply them to the test; but I do believe it will help to know what it means if they say something like "such and such is an ALLUSION to such and such" and I'll be like boom town, an allusion is an indirect reference, good thing I know what the writers of this test are talking about! So that's basically my Advanced Placement plan...

So what's the main idea behind Mrs. Holmes giving us that huge list of words? Well of course I didn't think there was a point, until I reflect upon the fact I've noticed the word "conceit" about four times since learning what it means, a word that in the past I would have just skimmed over. She uses words from that list often, like "synecdoche, polysyndeton" and "juxtapostion", words that before made me give that little brow fold that means "I have no idea what she's talking about".



#2 DIDLS
Don't laugh at me for doing this, but yes, I am making a whole section just for DIDLS. Why? It's something huge. That I learned. That I didn't know was so important before...don't lie, you didn't either. So let's get some dictionary definitions up in here first:

Diction: the accent, inflection, intonation, and speech-sound quality manifested by an individual speaker, usually judged in terms of prevailing standards of acceptability; enunciation.
Imagery: the formation of mental images, figures, or likenesses of things, or of such images
Detail: an individual or minute part; an item or particular.
Language: a body of words and the systems for their use common to a people who are of the same community or nation, the same geographical area, or the same cultural tradition.
Syntax: the study of the rules for the formation of grammatical sentences in a language.

Now for my definitions:

Diction: This is my favorite. Of course it is, it's the easiest. Diction is what something you can point to on that page. All it means is word choice. What words did the author use in order to enhance their writing.
Imagery: Appeals vividly to the senses. What you can see in your mind due to what you read on the paper.
Detail: This is one I sometimes struggle with finding examples of in text; which is ridiculous really because it's not that hard a concept. Detail is what the author throws in that really enhances the writing and draws a reaction from the reader. So if a writer was talking about "a small object", they could add detail by saying "the object was so small it was only a little larger than the tip of a pencil".
Syntax: Don't give me that "oh yeah, I totally knew what syntax was" before I took this class rubbish. Okay, maybe you did, maybe I should have, whatever. Syntax is how a particular sentence is grammatically formed. You can't point to syntax like you can with diction. It's all about sentence structure, and syntax is used by authors to convey and emphasize certain points.




#1 The Books We've Read
So far in second hour we've read:
1) The American Dream
2) Death of a Salesman
3) Ceremony
4) Pride and Prejudice
5) Hamlet

Some were a little more fascinating than others. About half the books I felt I learned a great deal about literature, others I was left going "huh, that's a lot of time I'll never get back...". But I guess you win some you lose some when text is assigned.
On the text...
The American Dream: This book was a good introduction into annotating, and when I look back, seems more conceptually simple to understand. The subtle undertones and witty uses of sarcasm that at the time blew my mind, now seem much more manageable. At this point, if I read this book on my own, I feel I could catch about... forty percent of the "deeper meaning" we discussed at length in class (remember, forty is a lot better than zero. You're progressing Heidi, really.)

Death of a Salesman: This is my favorite. I'm a-hopin' and a-prayin' one of the AP written questions can somehow be applied to this book, because it was just so, so, good. I don't know what else to say, I know I'll have to look over my annotations before the AP exam so they're fresh in my mind, but I should definitely look at this text the longest. My understanding for this book was so much greater than the other books we've read, and I really appreciated spending time trying to figure out its "deeper meanings".

Ceremony: I could write an overly bitter, strongly worded section about this book, but I'll just keep it short. I respect Mrs. Holmes decisions on text to read, and I know she feels Ceremony was deemed worthy. That is all.

Pride and Prejudice: So not going to lie, I definitely skimmed this book, even during annotations. Shh, don't hate me, I'm only hurting myself in that decision. So with that in mind, I can't really judge the book more than the fact that I found the themes petty and got bored quickly. I should ideally reread this book before the AP, as Mrs. Holmes said most written essays can be answered using this book in particular (or Death of a Salesman).

Hamlet: At first, I couldn't stand Hamlet. Okay, maybe I still can't stand Hamlet. But I am starting to appreciate Hamlet. I've been gone a lot, so annotating this will be good for me, as I missed a lot of the reading in class and feel I'm kind of behind in understanding, but I get the general gist of things. I have to continually remind myself it's much like The Lion King...which probably gives you a good idea of where my level of understanding is right now. The reason for my appreciation upon finishing this text was the unfolding of certain "deeper meanings". Such as Ophelia drowning herself because she's with child, and that being the ultimate sin. The opening line being a question, and the complete relevance that has on the rest of the play as a whole. How the cock crowing is an allusion to the old Bible story of denying seeing the lord three times before the cock crows...all very nice. Things like that just make me so happy, it just makes you go "ahhh...".